Today, you will take a look at the first drafts of your peers' articles. In groups of 3-4, you will share copies of your first draft.
After reading your peers' article, craft your feedback in the form of an email response to these four questions:
1. What did you like about the article? Think about what the strengths of the article are.
2. From the lead paragraph, what did you expect the story to be about?
3. To fully understand the story, what do you need (or want) to know?
4. If this were your story, what would you do to strengthen the article?
Responses should be directed TO the author and not ABOUT the author. Use "you/your" language.
When you are finished, email your peer with the feedback (and copy me).
Your groups are:
Sam, Sophie, Nicole
Lauren, Elinor, Faris, Diana
Evan, Stephanie, Ana, Iris
After reading your peers' article, craft your feedback in the form of an email response to these four questions:
1. What did you like about the article? Think about what the strengths of the article are.
2. From the lead paragraph, what did you expect the story to be about?
3. To fully understand the story, what do you need (or want) to know?
4. If this were your story, what would you do to strengthen the article?
Responses should be directed TO the author and not ABOUT the author. Use "you/your" language.
When you are finished, email your peer with the feedback (and copy me).
Your groups are:
Sam, Sophie, Nicole
Lauren, Elinor, Faris, Diana
Evan, Stephanie, Ana, Iris