You're the editor
Read this article from the Shield: http://www.macshieldonline.com/behind-the-scenes/
You have two tasks. First, I want you to copy-edit the article for grammar mistakes and inconsistencies. Copy and paste your corrections with a short explanation.
Secondly, consider this article as if it was a first draft. What feedback would you provide to improve the article?
Think of the news value of the article, it's purpose, it's organization. Consider also what else the article could be doing.
Post your feedback in your blog response beneath your copy-edits.
You have two tasks. First, I want you to copy-edit the article for grammar mistakes and inconsistencies. Copy and paste your corrections with a short explanation.
Secondly, consider this article as if it was a first draft. What feedback would you provide to improve the article?
Think of the news value of the article, it's purpose, it's organization. Consider also what else the article could be doing.
Post your feedback in your blog response beneath your copy-edits.